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Written by Kamaira Gopaul, Form 5, St. Joseph's Convent, San Fernando—Aug 6, 2009   


My eyes are so red,
They burn as I stare at this page,
Confused, so out of it in a daze.
I can't seem to focus.
Can't seem to set the record straight,
Somethin is holdin me back and I don't have the faith,
My body seems to give up,
Everytime a book stares at me,
My organs they die,
My brain it bleeds,
But I gotta get through this,'
my life depends on it,
I can't seem to move on,
Every part of me wants to quit.
If I don't fix this,
God alone knows what Im gonna do
I can't seem to escape this,
This thing that has me glued.
It's not the distractions, cuz nothing distracts me,
It's jus like a virus,
refused by my body,
My body jus gives up,
My organs they fail,
My brain its close to dying,
And I feel Im going to fail,
My mind cant wrap itself around,
the things its supposed to,
Can somebody help me,
Help me find a clue?


 

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written by sinead campbell , August 11, 2009

i love this poem because i resently did cxc an i kno how it feels



awwww thanks
written by kamzybear , August 14, 2009

yep it was about cxc. because I wrote it like a week before exams n yea wow this is wat came out so thanx for the feedback


reminds me of when i sat cxc
written by Tevan Mc Lean , October 15, 2009

LORD had mercy on my soul, cause i was ready to jump out ah building the day b4 my first exam...lol this poem brings back those days...and now i look at'em and laugh lol good poem(it made me relive those days)(i sat cxc this year LOL)


Loving it...
written by Lover girl... , November 26, 2009

My dear friend, you really have a gift. Loveing it.



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